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Rooted In the Earth

I'm glad to be a tree, but never a maple would I be for in the months of Fall, my russet leaves would plea for help when northerly winds blow them all away I couldn't save them as they sway, clinging to me I am tall but not as sturdy or majesctic as an oak Providing shade is fine, but not for those who smoke I'd be at the mercy of lovers, carving deep in my trunk No, I'd not be an oak that people gouge, cut and poke I would consider being a loblolly pine; an evergreen where birds can nest and perch to groom and preen Needles never shedding; my branches never laid bare Blanketed with snow, in a setting tranquil and serene Maybe I would be happy as a magnolia near a fence Uprooted as a sapling, once living in a forest, dense where my sweet blossoms attracted many honey bees before becoming pods, red with seeds that I dispense I like my life here beside a stream, content to be a willow with lush green grass beneath me, used as a soft pillow my leaves rain like tears, but new ones return in Spring In sadness I will dwell until then. I am a weeping willow January 28, 2021 If I Were A ? Contest Sponsor: Mystic Rose Rose ~ If I were a tree...

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Date: 2/4/2021 2:47:00 PM
such wonderful imagery Jenna and you have such lovely personification and rhymes, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/5/2021 1:48:00 AM
I'm grateful to have you visit so many of my poems and leave your thoughtful comments. Thanks so much, Jan.
Date: 2/4/2021 12:56:00 PM
You really did your research on trees here, but it being so poetic, you would think your part tree part human lol, you write beautifully. I loved your entry, thank you for joining, and congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/5/2021 1:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Mystic. No research; just lots of trees around me.
Date: 1/29/2021 3:55:00 PM
Hello Jenna … interesting topic indeed. Willows are not native and classed as a noxious weed down here because of their invasive roots. I do like weeping willows though and agree with all you wrote - thanks Jenna - Lindsay
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Date: 1/30/2021 8:24:00 AM
oh, that's a shame. I'd never think of such a beautiful tree as being invasive. They only seek water. Thank you for the information and for leaving me your thoughts.
Date: 1/29/2021 5:58:00 AM
A weeping willow suits you...soft and graceful. Nicely written, Jenna, good luck in the contest. Hugs.
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Date: 1/30/2021 8:23:00 AM
What a sweet thing to write, John. Thank you so much for the many kind remarks you leave me.
Date: 1/29/2021 4:18:00 AM
- A great choice, Jenna ... I see a wonderful tree :) - Best wishes in the contest - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/29/2021 4:55:00 AM
Thanks so much for your comments, Anne-Lise. Happy weekend to you, too.
Date: 1/29/2021 3:08:00 AM
Jenna, a wonderfully creative poem, love the gorgeous imagery!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/29/2021 3:23:00 AM
Good morning, Tania. Thanks so much for liking these lines. I appreciate your remarks.
Date: 1/28/2021 11:16:00 PM
All trees are beautiful really. The deciduous ones may lose their leaves, but it will grow them again. I love the willow best. ~~
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Date: 1/29/2021 1:58:00 AM
Yes, they are, and I especially fond of willows. Thank you for leaving your kind thoughts, Victor.
Date: 1/28/2021 6:41:00 PM
...excellente'....trees are...the shapes of times being as...thousands of years in/as one image........stan sand
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/29/2021 1:58:00 AM
Hi Stan, and thanks for the great comment.

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