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poem written for this week's poetry challenge: Tree's Perspective

write a poem from the point of view of a tree

ROOT BORN ORACLE

I rose when mountains were still young,  
when dawn had yet to find its tongue;  
the world was quiet, shadows sprung~  
I am rooted where time first learned to breathe.

I felt the first storm carve the sky,  
heard gods in thunder passing by;  
their murmurs stitched into my cry~
I am rooted where time first learned to breathe.

Your mortal heart beats soft and brief,  
yet stirs my roots with joy and grief;  
I cradle both like ancient leaf~
I am rooted where time first learned to breathe.

 
So rest beneath my ageless frame;  
your fleeting life and my endless flame;  
we meet, and nothing stays the same~
I am rooted where time first learned to breathe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Delegans Avatar
August 5, 2026 at 4:30 PM
The depth and imagery is beautiful. My fav lines are: Your mortal heart beats soft and brief, yet stirs my roots with joy and grief; Such a great write!
Poet Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 5:38 AM
Your poem exudes a sense of wonder and tranquility, dear Sara. With great imagery and perfect rhyme. Good luck.
Daniel Avatar
August 4, 2026 at 2:44 AM
I love this one, Sara, going into my faves❤️
Smith  Avatar
August 3, 2026 at 6:35 PM
I am rooted where time first learned to breathe. This really shows the knowledge that lays within trees. Really enjoyed this.🌹🌳🐣💋
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