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A fine damp gauze drapes across trees As white dread locks fan out Upon a pale blue morning sky White doves coo, roosters shout Come up orange sun, shine through shadows Silhouette trees, warm Surroundings for spring has sprung Coming into grand form Golden sun lift the drapes away Allow the birds to nest Bring the plants alive to seed, grow To replenish the earth's best

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Date: 4/10/2017 10:29:00 AM
It is a delight to view the spring morning scenes through your poetic perspective, Sara. Beautiful!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/19/2017 10:01:00 AM
Carolyn, I rode around the open field above Doris' house this morning and the woods along the edge still have hickory blooming, there is a type of oak that still has tassels and I think it is a birch that still has blooms so the pollen is still out there and I have now got a headache..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Date: 4/4/2017 3:44:00 AM
Excellent. A Lovely morning images and roosters shout. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/19/2017 10:00:00 AM
Ravi, Thanks for the visit..Glad that you saw the images as lovely..Roosters sometimes seem to be shouting when there are so many of them making the cock-a-doodle-dos in the hollow on the creek..Sara
Date: 4/3/2017 2:32:00 AM
Lovely lovely lovely! I love to read nature poem.
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Date: 4/19/2017 9:58:00 AM
Afolabi, Thanks for the visit to my page..I am glad that I had posted this one for you to read since you enjoy nature poems..Sara
Date: 4/2/2017 3:34:00 PM
A real wakeup call for us all in this roosters shout, to springs promise in its fulfilling time.'
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/19/2017 9:57:00 AM
Joe, Sometimes those roosters are a good thing but sometimes not so pleasant..Thanks for dropping by..Your comments are uplifting..Sara
Date: 4/1/2017 12:55:00 PM
This poem was entertaining and three dimensional in character. Good imagery and flow are both presented within these lines. Emile.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/19/2017 9:56:00 AM
Emile, Thanks for the encouraging comment..I appreciate you dropping by..Your support over the years has encouraged me when I was down..Sara
Date: 3/31/2017 1:25:00 PM
- A beautiful picture of spring that is on its way ... a wonderful time, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/19/2017 9:54:00 AM
We have gone full into spring with summer trailing on its wake..Thanks for all the visits and comments over they years..Sara
Date: 3/31/2017 11:58:00 AM
Lovely morning images, Sara.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/19/2017 9:53:00 AM
Your comments are uplifting ...Thanks for dropping by..Sara

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