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Room With a View A room with a view of the sea Where waves roll in with the breeze; With sunlight invading the place, Casting shadows of ambivalent grey. The vista one sees is hard to reiterate When distance and time co-operate; In a shrinking world out there in space To the cataclysm at the edge of the bay.

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Date: 6/27/2023 1:01:00 PM
Very powerfully written, Dennis. Your description of the vista that catches the sea presents a strong image of infinity, a world that stretches far beyond sight. Excellent work. Be well. Brian
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 6/28/2023 5:24:00 AM
Thank you Brian for your encouraging and thoughtful analytical comment. Take care.

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