Room For More Love

My Katie was here for a while and then gone.
Your face brings her face to mind.
Gazing at deep pools of innocence, I see
a loveliness usually hard to find.
Yet, time, I do need, so as not to compare
two faces, two hearts, in kind.
I want love, love filled of all loves of all time.
Not dry, as becomes the rind.
Spontaneous, deliciously, warm to the taste
love, bred of the subconscious mind.
Yes, bred of the subconscious mind.

It was June when my Katie and I said hello.
I was moved, my feelings defined.
The next June, in the spring of our life we wed,
an experience, one of a kind.
We loved with a love that only lovers know,
many look for, yet never find.
And the love, for this love, continued to grow
‘til we two were only one mind.
Yes, only one subconscious mind.

She gave me a gift, in nine months to the day,
our love now, forever affined.
Instead of dissolving the closer we came,
our hearts, and bodies entwined.
But something happened on that birthing bed.
A tiny seed, exposed, unconfined, 
grew, and continued to grow inside and spread,
all, part of life, as it is designed.
And I lost a gift, in nine months to the day,
one gift, for one gift, in kind.
Lost was that gift none can ever replace,
that gift come from the Divine,
a love in the subconscious mind.

Angels wept for joy, for my love and I,
for what we were and had combined.
Each from each to each other and no other,
each in that constant state of mind.
Promises lived and loved in the living.
Promises in the face of death resigned.
Made from the subconscious mind

I implore you deny me your love at this time.
It’s wrong when I am so disinclined.
But in a day, and a day, as I while time away
and become again less undermined.
The subconscious will mend, become whole again—
for surely angels are so divined.
To make room for more love, not throw out the old,
but simply fold the old in behind.

© May 23 2011 For Deb's "jack out of the box" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 5:34 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of deb, Charles
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June 3, 2011 at 5:22 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Jack Out Of Box" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2011 at 5:29 PM
Dear Charles- This goes to my super duper favs box! This is amazing and top notch stuff. I am deeply moved and I will have to stop reading any more poetry today just to reflect on this one....wow. I am floored, dear poet! Blessings to you for exposing your heart thru this transparent piece of art. Gwendolen
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June 2, 2011 at 5:15 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!! For the honorable mention... a deserved win....***jun-jun
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June 2, 2011 at 4:57 PM
wONDERFUL STORY TELLING cHARLES, JUST WONDERFUL, cONGRAD'S oops ;) on your win. Light & Love
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June 2, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Congrats Charles on your HM in Debbie's contest by stepping out of the box and creating excellent poetry.. enjoy your special honor with luv..
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May 23, 2011 at 12:14 PM
Very touching poem, Charles. I love the way you described "love filled of all loves of all time." Those we love seem to stay in our hearts forever. Soup mail in a moment. Wishing you success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn
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May 23, 2011 at 6:37 AM
a simply touching and tender write Charles.. emotional creativity to enjoy this delightful poem today with luv..
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