Room Disorder

Whose room is this
Crispy reek therein
Whose room is this
His under-wear dangling
Upon the ceiling fan switch
His clothes spread upon the couch
His pant hung upon the door
His books spread upon the floor
Whose room is this
His shoes upon TV set
Whose room is this
A stack of dingy plates upon radio set
His wedge upon ceiling fan
His towel hung upon stand fan
Cream, face powder ect. in the shoe rack
Anoush, Abdlemalik, Clack
Uh! Ha... It looks like mine
So much dis order within room of mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/21/2015 1:35:00 PM
LOL. Glad that Reps make occasional checks in Collage Dorms - Youths. Enjoyed reading this.
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Date: 8/25/2015 8:00:00 PM
OH my, Such disorder this is. Kind of like me in my college days. hahaha. I sure enjoyed reading this one!
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Date: 8/25/2015 3:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this humorous write, Afolabi. At least those pants will stop the door from banging:) I think this might be suitable for Casarah's contest! // paul
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Date: 8/25/2015 2:11:00 PM
- Sounds like a long summer vacation ..... lol - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/25/2015 10:27:00 AM
It reminds me of my university days! A good one dear A.M.
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Date: 8/24/2015 5:20:00 PM
Everything is right where you want it...lol
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Date: 8/24/2015 4:34:00 PM
Ha! Ha! I enjoyed this humorous write, Afolabi! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/24/2015 3:30:00 PM
Cute one..Reads like it matches my grandson's room when he comes home and it takes me a week to get it clean when he leaves..Line six His cloth maybe should be His clothes?? Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 8/24/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thank you so much for your dropped by to read and comment to my page and also thanks for corrected me on that. Stay blessed..............A.M.
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