Afolabi Muideen Poet Rhyme

Room Disorder

Whose room is this
Crispy reek therein
Whose room is this
His under-wear dangling
Upon the ceiling fan switch
His clothes spread upon the couch
His pant hung upon the door
His books spread upon the floor
Whose room is this
His shoes upon TV set
Whose room is this
A stack of dingy plates upon radio set
His wedge upon ceiling fan
His towel hung upon stand fan
Cream, face powder ect. in the shoe rack
Anoush, Abdlemalik, Clack
Uh! Ha... It looks like mine
So much dis order within room of mine.

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Rainbow Promise October 21, 2015 at 1:35 PM LOL. Glad that Reps make occasional checks in Collage Dorms - Youths. Enjoyed reading this.

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2015 at 8:00 PM OH my, Such disorder this is. Kind of like me in my college days. hahaha. I sure enjoyed reading this one!

Paul Callus August 25, 2015 at 3:43 PM Enjoyed this humorous write, Afolabi. At least those pants will stop the door from banging:) I think this might be suitable for Casarah's contest! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2015 at 2:11 PM - Sounds like a long summer vacation ..... lol - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 25, 2015 at 10:27 AM It reminds me of my university days! A good one dear A.M.

Tim Smith August 24, 2015 at 5:20 PM Everything is right where you want it...lol

Kim Merryman August 24, 2015 at 4:34 PM Ha! Ha! I enjoyed this humorous write, Afolabi! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick August 24, 2015 at 3:30 PM Cute one..Reads like it matches my grandson's room when he comes home and it takes me a week to get it clean when he leaves..Line six His cloth maybe should be His clothes?? Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Afolabi Muideen August 24, 2015 at 4:16 PM Thank you so much for your dropped by to read and comment to my page and also thanks for corrected me on that. Stay blessed..............A.M.