Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Room 56

From my balcony there is much to behold,
From cruise ships,visitors pouring into Jamaica,
young, middle aged and the old,
Different shapes,colour and style of dressing,
To Ocho Rios the pier is truly a blessing,
Smooth white sand and crystal clear blue sea,
Jamaican girls in straw hats and bath-suits,
entertaining under tents and coconut trees,
Tourist swimming,dancing,being massaged,
or just tanning,enjoying the sun and tropical breeze,
Taking tours on glass bottom boats or just
 riding the sea on jet skis,
 Surrounded by Jamaica Grand,Rooms,Sand Castle,
Turtle Towers and Fisherman Point,
This I believe is truly, one of Jamaicas favourite tourist joint......


From my balcony,Room 56,Fishermans Point.....

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Tshegofatso Seabe July 25, 2012 at 11:55 AM wish I could go there but its too far away, need to go out of Botswana for some fresh air Richard Palmer July 25, 2012 at 4:43 PM thanks T.S,COME AND GET IT

Carma Sanderson July 19, 2012 at 7:58 PM I love this soooo pieceful, wishful room 56, closing eyes, in the calmness of fishermans point pon yuh balcony.... Fully drem ing of sun sets touch..... Dancing, massaged all over mi bodie in yuh grand Jamaican rooms..... Awesome right richie, rich..... Xoxoxo Richard Palmer July 20, 2012 at 5:41 PM thanks Carma,enjoy I would

Courtney Courtney July 12, 2012 at 5:27 PM very nice I have been to Jamacia several times Bermuda is also lovely, I have a Bay named after me. Richard Palmer July 13, 2012 at 12:54 PM WOW PUBLIC FIGURE,THANKS RUTH

Asheka Collins June 3, 2012 at 8:20 AM Ah lovely I feel like I am there. I now wish to travel to Jamaica...nice Richard Palmer June 3, 2012 at 3:08 PM make plans,the summer is nice,christmas is better,lol thanks Asheka

Dave Timperley May 31, 2012 at 1:25 PM You also got my place Richard. I sit out and watch the cruise ships pass while I sip at a glass and look down on the blue Mediterranean Sea. I feel Gods blessing every time I do. God Bless, Dave. Richard Palmer July 20, 2012 at 5:40 PM wow great view,thanks Dave

Karen Deeks May 29, 2012 at 10:25 AM Hello richard I tried to review this earlier but it all went horribly wrong lol so sorry i took a while but here goes,,, I honestly hand on heart really enjoyed this with you fluent comfortable flow and your visuals laid down.. My mum moved there in the 80s and used to tell me with excitement how gorgeous it was.... I also loved the un-obvious title.. bravo ... Richard Palmer May 29, 2012 at 10:52 AM thanks alot Karen,feels great giving you such a wonderful feeling, honoured....

Peggy Caulfield May 28, 2012 at 10:49 AM Jamaica sounds beautiful. You really painted a vivid picture. Richard Palmer May 28, 2012 at 11:21 AM thanks,keep in touch gonna give you a lot more

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl May 28, 2012 at 8:42 AM Never manged to get that far Richard sounds divine reading this xx Thanks for the comment and for the good wishes. xx Richard Palmer May 28, 2012 at 9:40 AM hope you get time to put it in your schedule,thanks

Željko Sitar May 24, 2012 at 9:20 AM Very beautiful poem and I hope one day I will be able to see this beautiful island with my eyes!! Greetings from Croatia!!! Richard Palmer May 24, 2012 at 5:27 PM hope you do,an experience of a life time,nuff love from JA

Ann Roske May 23, 2012 at 8:49 AM My mind just took a vacation with your words! Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 11:41 AM did you bring a beach towel,lol,thanks

Joi Murphy May 23, 2012 at 8:34 AM Thanks for stopping by my page. This is a place I hope to visit one day! Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 11:40 AM make it soon,lol,thanks

Keith Bickerstaffe May 22, 2012 at 6:25 PM What a wealth of rich imagery you present! Makes me wanna buy a one-way plane ticket... BRAVO Richard!! Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 11:39 AM you wont regret,lol,thanks

Ivy Vresk May 21, 2012 at 2:05 PM if I close my eyes I can almost see blue ocean and feel the breeze, thank you Richard here where I am now is rain all day long and not much to see, lol, I am jealous ,lol ,thank you one more time I love how you write,one love,Ivy Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:25 PM hope the weather gets better soon,thanks

Josie Whitehead May 21, 2012 at 9:35 AM It's so interesting to read what you see from your balcony. From my window there is so much green. The trees are all out in green now and they are reflected in the small lake. The pink cherry blossom has gone to be replaced by purple lilac - - - but I bet the temperature is warmer where you are. They tell us it will be 24 here tomorrow. I'll believe it when I feel it, ha ha. Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:23 PM thanks for the opportunity to warm you up lol ,thanks

Joy Wellington May 20, 2012 at 10:21 AM I have a room 13 too but it was of memories of someone I once loved. Check it out, on campus JSA! Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:26 PM I did,keep writing and keep me reading,thanks

Joy Wellington May 20, 2012 at 10:18 AM Richard, thanks for taking me back home to Jamaica, I enjoyed the view and hope to be there in person soon. One love. Joy Wells Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:30 PM Sorry it was such a short trip,lol,hope you get to make it,one love