Rookie On the Soup
( ROOKIE ON THE SOUP )
My name is Jasmine I use rhymes when I write, so my poems are in a loop.
I found a new place to share my poetry, and I`m a rookie on the soup.
I hope everyone welcomes me here, so far everyone is nice.
Soon once I feel comfortable, I will be a premium for a price.
I use material that comes from my heart, and I put them into words.
I have plenty of time and patience, my poems will come in herds.
So sit right back and enjoy my work, and tell me what you think.
Alot of my pieces are refreshing, so relax, read and have a drink.
Criticism is welcomed, so please be up front and tell the truth.
I hope I create a vibe here, or somewhat of a sleuth.
I`ll be happy if at least one poem, effects someones life.
Make them laugh or cause a tear, maybe take away some strife.
I have found a home that I can share my thoughts, express how I feel.
Also read other poems, and tell them whats my deal.
Thank you for excepting me, and having me be in your group.
Hello again I`m Jasmine Cruz, and I`m a rookie on the soup
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