Roofs

I rarely think of roofs at home,
But when I am abroad,
I notice many little things 
That strike a different chord.

The hotel window gives a view
Of houses ‘cross the street
With many chimneys sticking up
Like soldiers on their feet.

They might have other uses
And I don’t care what they are.
For me, they’re a reminder
That I’ve traveled someplace far.

It’s a privilege to explore
The unfamiliar while you can,
Since you never know when circumstance
May have another plan.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Greenhough Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 3:41 AM
You've well described an old city where roofs seem visible from a balcony. Such joy you must have to travel to unique placees. Thank you for sharing your adventure.
Rolland Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 1:30 AM
original and inspiring, wouldn't have think of roofs, thanks poet
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2025 at 12:03 PM
Good one Ilene, we tend to focus on things at eye level and miss so much . Son is in Kuala Lumpur and sending some awesome pics! hugs jan xx
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