Roofers

roofers in the rain
spared from sun
hummingbirds dancing

6th gradebirddancerainhaiku

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Regina Elliott

November 2, 2023 at 5:54 AM

Hi dear Kim, thank you for your kindness. The Lune poem was created by the poet Robert Kelly. It's a 3-line poem, with 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line, 5 syllables in the third line. Lune poems can tell a story, they don't have to have a nature theme, but nature can be a theme,they can have other themes too. There are no other rules for constructing a Lune poem other than the syllable rule. Have a creative day!

Kim Rodrigues

November 2, 2023 at 5:20 AM

Wonderful imagery! Please explain lune haiku. <3

Regina Elliott

November 2, 2023 at 6:02 AM

Hi dear Kim, thank you for your kindness. The Lune poem was created by the poet Robert Kelly. It's a 3-line poem, with 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line, 5 syllables in the third line. Lune poems can tell a story, they don't have to have a nature theme, but nature can be a theme. They can have other themes too. There are no other rules for constructing a Lune poem other than the syllable rule.

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