Rondel-Devious In My Feeble Step

Devious in my feeble step...
seeking some pure, fresh air
and lay under a shady, tall fir
with strong desire on my lip.


My forehead continues to drip,
not finding any soothing lair; 
devious in my feeble step...
seeking some fresh, pure air. 


God! halt the desperado's grip...
if he acts in fierce dispair,
resorting to the wildest temper
with his voice lashing like a whip!
Devious in my feeble step...
seeking some pure, fresh air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Congras Andrew on your HM in Jared's contest with this wonderful Rondel entry.. enjoy your honor my friend..with luv from the "Sweetheart" on vacation in Hawaii...
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Rondel". Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Well penned Rondel. Good luck in the contest
Bloomsfield Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 11:58 AM
Great flow in verses!Celene!
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