Romantic Mia

R hythmic waves rose bending, beating
O ut of my heart into my soul breathing once again, 
M elting beneath the silk heavens hued in cherry blossoms. 
A nother night to drown in your moonlight blue eyes, 
N uzzle into your neck then savor your lips once again, 
T angle my fingers through your silky chestnut hair.
I don't ever want this night to end
C aught in the lace work of your love.



9/8/2021

Message In An Acrostic 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 7:54 PM
Congrats, Eve. Enjoyed this and chuckled with the, "Caught in the lace of your love." Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
Agustin Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Wow! Congrats! It's just that, "what a twist" is all I could say...God bless you.
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 1:04 PM
love the message Eve, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kauffman Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Congratulations on your win Eve. Really masterfully done acrostic with a subliminal message! Hugs and a secret smile.
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Eve, a big congrats on your well-deserved win! Wow! You really threw us a curve ball! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 8:08 PM
Whoa to your hidden message...lol! Great imagery and great twist! Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Eve!
Roper Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Kim, I am honored.
Proxenos Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 9:03 AM
An awesome romantic Acrostic poem -your love shines for your lost love. Hugs and blessings dear Evie, Jennifer.
Sands Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Beautiful Acrostic Eve :)
Jayasankar Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Aww... This is SO romantic dear Eve... Best wishes in the contest... Hugs... ~ Ani
Liguori Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Romance is in the air! Wonderful capture of true love!
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Ahh!!! Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. So romantic. I appreciate your visit to my page. I put an answer to your question in my reply to the comment you made on my page. Sara
Hawkins Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 8:15 PM
Beautiful romantic acrostic. So perfectly written, full of love and passion. Good luck in the contest, Eve.
Theraven Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:48 PM
Eve, Such a romance cherished in a beautiful smiling Acrostic. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 3:05 PM
Gosh. This is the most romantic acrostic I've ever read. Really wonderful, Eve! Here's to a winner. ~ gw
Buehler Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 11:50 AM
This beautiful, romantic verse is a masterful creation, Eve. Best of wishes for a win. :D
Dubey Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Such a romantic poem Eve.Very well written.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 2:08 AM
Very well done.
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