Romancing a Cinquain

Dancing.
We're romancing.
Laughter is in her eyes.
I whisper that she is my prize.
She sighs.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

October 12, 2023 at 11:03 AM

Hello Speaks Volumes, It is so romantic. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 20, 2023 at 4:41 AM

Hello speaks Volumes, I say better late then never. You are welcome my friend. Enjoy your day. /Darlene\

Speaks Volumes

October 20, 2023 at 1:13 AM

Thank you Darlene, your comment is appreciated. Sorry for the late response. SV

Jay Narain

October 12, 2023 at 10:37 AM

Aah, very romantic, Some ladies may not like to be called a prize though.

Speaks Volumes

October 20, 2023 at 1:16 AM

I think prize is OK, its trophy we don't like. Prize is something you earn, but a trophy is more of an ornament. Glad you saw the romance in it my friend. You comments are ALWAYS appreciated Jay. Thank you. SV

Hiya Sharma

October 11, 2023 at 11:04 PM

Oh my, such a romantic and love filled poem this is, creating a mesmeric poetic ambience! "Laughter is in her eyes" A saccharine line.. Such a beautiful take for the cinquain contest dear SV, it feels so good to read your poems always! Sending love and light :)

Speaks Volumes

October 20, 2023 at 1:13 AM

You are such a sweetie, Thanks so much Hiya. Sorry for the late response.