Romancing a Cinquain

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Dancing. We're romancing. Laughter is in her eyes. I whisper that she is my prize. She sighs.

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Jay Narain

Date: 10/12/2023 10:37:00 AM

Aah, very romantic, Some ladies may not like to be called a prize though.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 10/20/2023 1:16:00 AM

I think prize is OK, its trophy we don't like. Prize is something you earn, but a trophy is more of an ornament. Glad you saw the romance in it my friend. You comments are ALWAYS appreciated Jay. Thank you. SV

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/11/2023 11:04:00 PM

Oh my, such a romantic and love filled poem this is, creating a mesmeric poetic ambience! "Laughter is in her eyes" A saccharine line.. Such a beautiful take for the cinquain contest dear SV, it feels so good to read your poems always! Sending love and light :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 10/20/2023 1:13:00 AM

You are such a sweetie, Thanks so much Hiya. Sorry for the late response.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/11/2023 8:21:00 PM

Simply sweet!

Speaks Volumes
Date: 10/20/2023 1:12:00 AM

Thanks so much Kim. Sorry for the late response.