Romance Captured
Hey! If you have followed me, you probably already know that I am a professional photographer. This poem is describing a couples session. I would like to add all or part to my website, but I would like some feedback. Often times, people don't understand my rhymes. For business, I need the reader to comprehend. CC would be greatly appreciated! Thanks and God bless!
Passion and romance
That look in her eye
I poetically enhance
You need not even try
A photograph I capture
Of a moment unrehearsed
Honest, raw and pure
You discover your own verse
The song of your love
Will grow in each direction
Side to side, below and above
The ivy of affection
But that second of time
I tuck inside a capsule
The beginning of your rhyme
Won't budge by nature's pull
Though most moments perish
Each day, just like the sun
This one, you will cherish
Until your days are done
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