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Roman Legion

Ignatius inspected his cohort
The unknown one and his men
He needed the best to fight for him
He needed the best to fight for them

Iduma stood tall, with a beard of fiery red
Didn’t like Ignatius, he wanted his job instead
Now was the time, he could prove his worth
He was born to be a leader; he knew it from birth

Ianus the two-faced one, wasn’t sure whose side to take
He watched Ignatius and Iduma, he waited for his break
The cohorts were ordered to drink, and sup from the pool
Then Ignatius would pick his men, he was nobody’s fool

To take Britannia from Caesar, that was Ignatius’ game
And then he wouldn’t be unknown, everyone will know his name
The ones that sipped from the pool, while keeping watch around
They were the cohorts Ignatius used, his cohorts he had found

Caesar when he slept, would be in his tent set by the river
Ignatius sent his men, to bring back the Caesar’s liver
Iduma heard the plan, his temper rose and boiled
He would not let Caesar die; it was Ignatius that would be broiled

Ianus watched them both, a side he needed to pick
He wanted to be on the winning one, he knew he must act quick
The cohorts crept into the camp; to take Caesar was their plan
Then Ignatius knew he would be leader, he would be their man

Ianus decided to foil the plan, and so he set a small trap
He told Caesar what was afoot, and then his thigh did slap
He hid in Caesars’ tent and waited for the cohorts
But it seemed to him that Idouma… must have read his thoughts

His two-faced trickery failed, at the conception of his plan
Iduma didn’t trust him, he was a two-faced man
Ianus of the two faces would pick sides when things were good
But he hadn’t counted on Idouma; it was something that he should

Ignatius failed to take Caesar, and will forever remain unknown
Londinium became a diocese, of the Roman throne
With Ianus dead and Ignatius too, that left only Iduma with his men
For Caesar to promote him, not of one cohort, but ten.

Ignatius .   Loose translations in Latin …..Unknowning
Iduma…       ……………………………. red
Ianus…         …………………………… two faces.
Caesar……………………………………King
Cohorts…….. The Legion was split into 10 Cohorts. The Cohorts were divided into 
Centuries. The First Cohort contained five centuries of 160 'crack troops.

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Date: 7/18/2014 3:56:00 PM
Mandy, Thanks for the reply on my comment...Linda
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Date: 7/6/2014 1:04:00 PM
Hi Mandy, congratulations on your fine win! I enjoyed reading this well-penned write on the Roman Legion! Wow, what an amazing, detailed story, very imaginative, and cleverly told! Thank you for sharing this poetic gem!
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Date: 7/3/2014 9:49:00 AM
Loved the story factor of this poem. Congratilations on such a well written win!
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Date: 7/3/2014 9:15:00 AM
Great write Mandy...Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/1/2014 9:32:00 PM
Splendid drama, exquisite psychology, beautifully researched, and marvelously penned Mandy. I love this poem, and it honors not only Romsn history, but the psychology of internal squad ambition. Great names too! Julius Caesar earned his Legend, and was a great writer as well. J.A.B.
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Date: 7/1/2014 7:23:00 AM
Hi Mandy! My compliments on a very informative and well written entry. Long but flowing, helped by the rhyme. Congrats on a merited top placing. // paul
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Paul xx
Date: 7/1/2014 6:00:00 AM
Wow! Mandy! So many lessons in this amazing write! Congrats on a great win.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:12:00 AM
Thanks Arlene had to do a little research lol xx
Date: 6/30/2014 10:26:00 PM
Congrats, Mandy... Linda
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Linda xx
Date: 6/30/2014 10:24:00 PM
The most complicated plot of all the entries. Quite sinister. Poem was an instant winner for me; very engaging.
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thanks Isaiah enjoyed the challenge xx
Date: 6/28/2014 7:55:00 AM
always more than the basic poem from you Mandy, also heaps of info, and very interesting it is too///like this,,good luck...
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:10:00 AM
Thanks harry xx
Date: 6/28/2014 1:17:00 AM
Very nice and informative poem on Roman Legion, good luck in the contest, Mandy
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Date: 7/1/2014 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Dr Ram, xx

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