Rolling Thunder (In My Chest)

I hear the willows weeping

in the corners of my mind,

I feel the sand go slipping

through the hourglass of time.


I see the catfish whiskers,

more like tentacles, thick and black,

I sense the wasp nest growing

as I wait for their attack.


I watch the full moon rising

as the sun sets in the west,

I feel the thunder rolling

like a pounding in my chest.


I hear the barn owl's question,

though the answer no one knows,

as the spider weaves her magic

in the poison mistletoe.

©Danielle White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ginn Avatar
February 6, 2009 at 4:11 PM
Danielle this is such a wonderful write. Each phrase is so descriptive. I really like it. Laurie
Mckenzie Avatar
February 6, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Danielle A strong flowing poem with nature being used to express yourself, well done I say.This is a favorite for me! I love your strong imagery too.I love it!!!!!! Love Laura :)
Degenhardt Avatar
February 6, 2009 at 8:17 AM
woe, talk about dramatic. This read, with the many images really talks of internal observations and questions. Marvelous rhyme scheme and just so very well written. Michael
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