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Rolling Back Memories

A muted awakening this morning By a gentle wind driven rain Beating a light tat rat tat rat On the half open window pane, Waking me with the trio of Rain, whispering breeze And the sighing of swaying Many branched trees, Rolling back the memories, Teenaged late mornings in bed In the little village cottage Hands clasped behind my head In a sort of magic detached state Of wind and tree and bird song Peaceful, enduring, lasting The whole day and night long. A world never ever thought to change But, now except in memory, long gone. Time’s moved on, life got faster Villages no longer isolated As distances shrunk, Journey times decimated And, in my old age in my home Once again encircled by trees I can lie in bed in my dotage and Once again listen to a singing breeze, Recapture that sense of awe and peace With a noise that can never ever fail To bring me peace in advancing age. Is life a circle, a snake biting it’s tail’ Does time, in some way reverse And then restart its flow As fashions start and stop And trends and foibles come and go.

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Date: 2/26/2023 5:14:00 PM
Looking back is my favourite past time now that I am old. Well done, son. A good strong poem, depicts what you wanted to say with just enough descriptive writing to enhance it without weighing it down. I enjoyed every line Terry Ireland. I will read more in time God willing.
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Date: 12/17/2022 12:20:00 PM
you've captured your mood quite beautifully in this poem, terry. i enjoyed...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/18/2022 1:54:00 AM
Thanks ilene. Always that gentle wind as a child, the sounds from the working Blacksmith shop, and the sheer sense of peace. Not quite the same now but, over 60 years, close enough.
Date: 12/17/2022 7:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one day. Lying in bed with the sound of the rain is inviting. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/18/2022 1:55:00 AM
Thanks Sara. I always think there's something special about the sound of rain when youre not out in it,=.

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