Rolling Back Memories

A muted awakening this morning 
By a gentle wind driven rain
Beating a light tat rat tat rat
On the half open window pane,
Waking me with the trio of
Rain, whispering breeze
And the sighing of swaying 
Many branched trees,
Rolling back the memories,
Teenaged late mornings in bed
In the little village cottage
Hands clasped behind my head
In a sort of magic detached state
Of wind and tree and bird song
Peaceful, enduring, lasting
The whole day and night long.
A world never ever thought to change
But, now except in memory, long gone.
Time’s moved on, life got faster 
Villages no longer isolated
As distances shrunk,
Journey times decimated 
And, in my old age in my home
Once again encircled by trees
I can lie in bed in my dotage and
Once again listen to a singing breeze,
Recapture that sense of awe and peace
With a  noise that can never ever fail
To bring me peace in advancing age.
Is life a circle, a snake biting it’s tail’
Does time, in some way reverse 
And then restart its flow 
As fashions start and stop
And trends and foibles come and go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 2/26/2023 5:14:00 PM
Looking back is my favourite past time now that I am old. Well done, son. A good strong poem, depicts what you wanted to say with just enough descriptive writing to enhance it without weighing it down. I enjoyed every line Terry Ireland. I will read more in time God willing.
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Date: 12/17/2022 12:20:00 PM
you've captured your mood quite beautifully in this poem, terry. i enjoyed...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/18/2022 1:54:00 AM
Thanks ilene. Always that gentle wind as a child, the sounds from the working Blacksmith shop, and the sheer sense of peace. Not quite the same now but, over 60 years, close enough.
Date: 12/17/2022 7:36:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one day. Lying in bed with the sound of the rain is inviting. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/18/2022 1:55:00 AM
Thanks Sara. I always think there's something special about the sound of rain when youre not out in it,=.
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