ROLL AWAY BED ROLL OUT AND ON

Imagine sleeping on a roll away bed not holding steady
Overnight sleep ride
That’s what every roll away bed provides
It comes when a person turns over in twist and turn
The roll away Bed is not firm
It’s about move
You certainly wouldn’t be smooth nor soothe
You would find yourself somewhere all over the room
Travelling without ever getting up at no charge
Take it from me, I have experienced sleep being no option
Journey to anywhere within
Unplanned moment, but anticipate
The Roll away bed has the right name
There’s no telling where you will aim
Full of no sleep surprises heading for the door
Roll out definitely for sure
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 3/23/2025 11:31:00 AM
This poem is such a clever and humorous take on the unpredictable nature of roll-away beds! I love how you captured the chaotic experience with lines like 'Travelling without ever getting up at no charge' — it made me smile. The playful rhythm mirrors the movement of the bed itself, giving it a lighthearted and relatable vibe. Your words vividly paint a picture of restless nights and unexpected journeys without ever leaving the room. Great job combining humor and imagery!
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Date: 3/23/2025 11:29:00 AM
This poem is such a clever and humorous take on the unpredictable nature of roll-away beds! I love how you captured the chaotic experience with lines like 'Travelling without ever getting up at no charge' — it made me smile. The playful rhythm mirrors the movement of the bed itself, giving it a lighthearted and relatable vibe. Your words vividly paint a picture of restless nights and unexpected journeys without ever leaving the room. Great job combining humor and imagery!
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