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ROLL AWAY BED ROLL OUT AND ON

Imagine sleeping on a roll away bed not holding steady Overnight sleep ride That’s what every roll away bed provides It comes when a person turns over in twist and turn The roll away Bed is not firm It’s about move You certainly wouldn’t be smooth nor soothe You would find yourself somewhere all over the room Travelling without ever getting up at no charge Take it from me, I have experienced sleep being no option Journey to anywhere within Unplanned moment, but anticipate The Roll away bed has the right name There’s no telling where you will aim Full of no sleep surprises heading for the door Roll out definitely for sure

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Date: 3/23/2025 11:31:00 AM
This poem is such a clever and humorous take on the unpredictable nature of roll-away beds! I love how you captured the chaotic experience with lines like 'Travelling without ever getting up at no charge' — it made me smile. The playful rhythm mirrors the movement of the bed itself, giving it a lighthearted and relatable vibe. Your words vividly paint a picture of restless nights and unexpected journeys without ever leaving the room. Great job combining humor and imagery!
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Date: 3/23/2025 11:29:00 AM
This poem is such a clever and humorous take on the unpredictable nature of roll-away beds! I love how you captured the chaotic experience with lines like 'Travelling without ever getting up at no charge' — it made me smile. The playful rhythm mirrors the movement of the bed itself, giving it a lighthearted and relatable vibe. Your words vividly paint a picture of restless nights and unexpected journeys without ever leaving the room. Great job combining humor and imagery!
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