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Rogue cloud

rogue cloud
highjacking
the sun



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

lightnatureskysunhaiku

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Caren Krutsinger

September 5, 2019 at 10:52 PM

See what Sandra and Gershon said? I have nothing this great to say, so re-read their comments and know that I agree with both of them.

Line Gauthier

September 6, 2019 at 8:49 AM

LOL thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.

Sandra Adams

September 5, 2019 at 9:38 AM

great visual, now we need to push that cloud along so we can see the day shine like your words :) nicely penned!

Line Gauthier

September 5, 2019 at 12:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sandra.

Gershon Wolf

September 5, 2019 at 2:59 AM

Great phrase (rogue cloud), great scenario (hijacking the sun), great snapshot --- great haiku! :) gw

Line Gauthier

September 5, 2019 at 8:45 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Gershon.

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