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It was a hot and dusty day the crowd fidgets as it waits bull dripping sweat in shute bay. howdy folks the announcers say Raging Tornado in shute awaits it was a hot and dusty day. Saddle slipping this and that way only held in place by weights bull dripping sweat in shute bay. R.T. chews on his cud of hay pawing the ground in anger waits it was a hot and dusty day. Flies out of shute now comes what may saddle slips man evacuates bull dripping sweat in shute bay. Riders distract bull hold at bay while man slides out and valuates It was a hot and dusty day bull dripping sweat in shute bay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/24/2015 9:31:00 PM
Shadow, came back to say thank you for placing me. Just got to read all the winning pieces and I'm honored to have been placed alongside their names. Found I forgot to leave a comment here the first time. I like this. I can clearly picture the scene! Might try this form as I haven't tried villanelle before. Again, thank you. God bless you for the inspiration! hugs!
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:34:00 AM
This is quite the ride, well done Shadow.
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:55:00 AM
ty Richard hugs
Date: 4/25/2015 9:51:00 AM
Hey, what an interesting way to tell a rodeo story in pantoum style!! Were you inspired by that recent movie about the rodeo guy? Wish I could remember the name of that movie!!
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Date: 5/23/2015 7:54:00 AM
no Andrea just from a misspent youth of reading cowboy books lol hugs
Date: 4/24/2015 7:59:00 AM
Another excellent pen.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/24/2015 12:00:00 PM
ty ML hugs
Date: 4/23/2015 8:29:00 PM
Hello Shadow... ah yes, you explained a portion of a rodeo well Shadow. My God those bulls frightened me in those holding pens. Thank you Shadow - Lindsay
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Date: 4/24/2015 6:05:00 AM
they are awesome, what power and rage they have. ty Lindsay hugs
Date: 4/23/2015 1:09:00 PM
Good one .. Well carried out in this difficult form..Enjoyed reading about those tough bulls..thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 4/23/2015 4:22:00 PM
ty Sara hugs
Date: 4/23/2015 11:20:00 AM
wow what a vivid descriptive write Shadow I could picture this so clearly in my mind:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 4/23/2015 4:21:00 PM
ty Jan hugs

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