Rocky Ledge

Lone rocky outcrop
Isolated hardened heart
Cold wind scours surface
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Laan Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 2:41 AM
very sad haiku with beautiful imagery. I really feel the isolation and the image of the hardened heart is so strong as the cold wind scours, that is a really strong word, I can feel it scouring, ouch!
Devonshire Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:15 AM
A sad but moving description of that feeling of isolation, Stephen. Compelling haiku!
Babcock Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 8:14 AM
A great Haiku and very descriptive. God Bless Phyl
Mehta Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Very nice haiku with good images, Stephen
Kopp Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 10:27 AM
thanks for your kind words
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