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Rocky Ledge

Lone rocky outcrop Isolated hardened heart Cold wind scours surface

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 2:41:00 AM
very sad haiku with beautiful imagery. I really feel the isolation and the image of the hardened heart is so strong as the cold wind scours, that is a really strong word, I can feel it scouring, ouch!
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:15:00 AM
A sad but moving description of that feeling of isolation, Stephen. Compelling haiku!
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Date: 12/9/2010 8:14:00 AM
A great Haiku and very descriptive. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 12/8/2010 10:50:00 AM
Very nice haiku with good images, Stephen
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Date: 12/8/2010 10:27:00 AM
thanks for your kind words
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