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Rocking Robins - Ah

raucous red robins
rocking, rolling, ring refrain ~
redwood ricochet

2/26/23
Contest: Alliterku Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 3:08 AM
Ha!! I like the play on the song. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 10:09 AM
- Back with congratulations, Tania :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "rocking robins - ah" is a wonderful "R" words/write. Have a blessed Sunday....................
Kitchin Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 9:50 AM
Paula, thank you.
Messina Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Lovely write, Tania. Funny, as I am commenting there are six robins sitting on my lawn this morning.. Perfect timing :) Congratulations on your win! ~Charlie
Kitchin Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Charlie, thank you, the picture with this poem was taken in my backyard, a tree full of robins.
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 10:10 PM
This is fantastic. one of the best on the list
Kitchin Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:43 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Chuuk Avatar
March 3, 2023 at 8:44 PM
Fantastic haiku, Tina. I loved it :)
Kitchin Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:43 AM
Fin, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 3:41 AM
- Rolls on the tongue ... great one, Tania :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 2:36 AM
Oh how I loved this poem.
Kitchin Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:15 AM
Victor, thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:12 AM
VERY COOL!!!
Kitchin Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Andrea, thank you.
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