Rocking Horse Rounds

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movement
swaying full hips
circle 

circle
avoiding touch
heat stroke

stroke
long, deep, and hard
rhythmic

rhythmic 
overflowing 
waves rock

rocking
stallion ridden
sleep comes

coming
home lullaby
sweet sound

soundless
dawn breaks the night
cock crows

crows flock
in fertile fields
hybrid

high bred
the son is born
again

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Julia Ward

Date: 3/18/2015 3:38:00 AM

Debbie - An interesting poem to read, especially the last stanza. Julia, :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/1/2015 1:03:00 AM

This new form is not an easy one, but you've excelled at it. Very well done, Debbie. Good luck in Rick's contest!... Have a Happy New Year! I wish you all the best for 2015!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/17/2015 8:52:00 AM

classic case of writing for myself & not the judge - it may be an uncomfortable reality what I have shown in verse non-the-less it is a reality ;)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/31/2014 3:38:00 PM

A magnificently, well penned piece.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/29/2014 11:22:00 PM

Wow, one of the best I've read for this contest! Three weeks without a post from you is too long. :))