Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

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Rocking Horse Rounds

movement
swaying full hips
circle 

circle
avoiding touch
heat stroke

stroke
long, deep, and hard
rhythmic

rhythmic 
overflowing 
waves rock

rocking
stallion ridden
sleep comes

coming
home lullaby
sweet sound

soundless
dawn breaks the night
cock crows

crows flock
in fertile fields
hybrid

high bred
the son is born
again

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Julia Ward March 18, 2015 at 3:38 AM Debbie - An interesting poem to read, especially the last stanza. Julia, :)

Kelly Deschler January 1, 2015 at 1:03 AM This new form is not an easy one, but you've excelled at it. Very well done, Debbie. Good luck in Rick's contest!... Have a Happy New Year! I wish you all the best for 2015! Debbie Guzzi January 17, 2015 at 8:52 AM classic case of writing for myself & not the judge - it may be an uncomfortable reality what I have shown in verse non-the-less it is a reality ;)

M. L. Kiser December 31, 2014 at 3:38 PM A magnificently, well penned piece.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 29, 2014 at 11:22 PM Wow, one of the best I've read for this contest! Three weeks without a post from you is too long. :))