Rocking Horse Rounds

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movement swaying full hips circle circle avoiding touch heat stroke stroke long, deep, and hard rhythmic rhythmic overflowing waves rock rocking stallion ridden sleep comes coming home lullaby sweet sound soundless dawn breaks the night cock crows crows flock in fertile fields hybrid high bred the son is born again

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Julia Ward

Date: 3/18/2015 3:38:00 AM

Debbie - An interesting poem to read, especially the last stanza. Julia, :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/1/2015 1:03:00 AM

This new form is not an easy one, but you've excelled at it. Very well done, Debbie. Good luck in Rick's contest!... Have a Happy New Year! I wish you all the best for 2015!

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/17/2015 8:52:00 AM

classic case of writing for myself & not the judge - it may be an uncomfortable reality what I have shown in verse non-the-less it is a reality ;)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/31/2014 3:38:00 PM

A magnificently, well penned piece.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 12/29/2014 11:22:00 PM

Wow, one of the best I've read for this contest! Three weeks without a post from you is too long. :))