Rock Vision

Rock spirits waiting
to pass another sunset
on beautiful earth.


     for Raul Moreno's contest

naturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 29, 2014 at 5:52 PM

Sue... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

Izzy Gumbo

May 5, 2010 at 6:52 AM

Lovely write Sue Mason! :) ...thanks for your kind comments also, I always appreciate seeing you. I don't think the Mayan are complicated at all... we who translate them simply make it that way. lol! Sells more books ;)

Gert W. Knop

May 1, 2010 at 2:59 AM

Lovely penned Haiku, Sue! At sunset the rock spirits will awake! Yes, Kibbutz life was really great in the late 1970ies. Some of my friends revisited our Kibbutz this year and were very disappointed as too much had changed. There are no volunteers any more and in the cow shed are Filipino workes milking the cows. The small houses were we lived have been pulled down. Too much has changed!!!Yes, the wall makes me feel sad, too!..Gert

James Marshall Goff

April 30, 2010 at 5:43 PM

well penned! Sue! jimbo

Travis Tapley

April 29, 2010 at 3:12 PM

Terrific Haiku. This had a peaceful feel to it. i know it was because of the sunset and the thoughts of this beautiful planet we live on. Excellent poem.