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Rock Vision

Rock spirits waiting to pass another sunset on beautiful earth. for Raul Moreno's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/29/2014 5:52:00 PM
Sue... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2010 6:52:00 AM
Lovely write Sue Mason! :) ...thanks for your kind comments also, I always appreciate seeing you. I don't think the Mayan are complicated at all... we who translate them simply make it that way. lol! Sells more books ;)
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Date: 5/1/2010 2:59:00 AM
Lovely penned Haiku, Sue! At sunset the rock spirits will awake! Yes, Kibbutz life was really great in the late 1970ies. Some of my friends revisited our Kibbutz this year and were very disappointed as too much had changed. There are no volunteers any more and in the cow shed are Filipino workes milking the cows. The small houses were we lived have been pulled down. Too much has changed!!!Yes, the wall makes me feel sad, too!..Gert
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Date: 4/30/2010 5:43:00 PM
well penned! Sue! jimbo
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Date: 4/29/2010 3:12:00 PM
Terrific Haiku. This had a peaceful feel to it. i know it was because of the sunset and the thoughts of this beautiful planet we live on. Excellent poem.
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:55:00 AM
congrats on your win well done faleshia
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Date: 4/25/2010 8:33:00 PM
Good win Congrats Sue- those rocks were mesmerizing
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Date: 4/25/2010 5:35:00 PM
A number #2 spot for Sue!!! Hooray for you, !!! Well done !! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/25/2010 4:24:00 PM
Sue, congratulations on placing 2nd in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:00:00 PM
What an uplifting view! I like the opening line. Good luck in the contest. Karen
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:11:00 PM
Loveliness in poetry!! :)
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Date: 4/24/2010 5:45:00 PM
Sue~ what a beautiful piece this is best wishes in the contest! Laura :)
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