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Rock turtles in blue waters . . .their crawl so slow it’s imperceptible 2/20/2016 Based on a beautiful picture of a New England shoreline.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/2/2018 10:04:00 AM
Clever, Andrea. If I swam near a rock turtle and it moved, I'd break Mark Whatshisname's record.
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Date: 12/29/2017 4:04:00 PM
Great Monoku, Andrea!
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Date: 9/2/2017 7:31:00 AM
very nice
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Date: 8/14/2017 9:59:00 AM
congrats on your win - i like how you can see the turtles in the blue water
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Date: 8/6/2017 2:10:00 AM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/21/2016 6:55:00 PM
I like it! Great job. Bravo!!!
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Date: 3/16/2016 3:27:00 AM
Congrats on your Monoku win7.5
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Date: 2/28/2016 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and this very wonderful monuko my dear friend, Andrea! Yes, I agree with our dear friend, Paul. Rock turtles made your poem unique and brilliant! Congrats once again! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:57:00 AM
I missed this one before; glad to be reading it now...your rock turtles are quite unique! Congratulations on your fine win:) // paul
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Date: 2/23/2016 8:03:00 PM
Well Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest. This is an excellent Monoku. It is so easy to understand this one when one looks at the picture. The way the Monoku is written, one would understand it without the picture. Excellent. A Seven and into my Faves....Mike.
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Date: 2/23/2016 2:19:00 PM
Hey Andrea, those turtles rock..' Oh and another winner.!
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Date: 2/23/2016 7:46:00 AM
See what I mean? in those few words, you have grabbed my imagination and given it floaties.
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:17:00 PM
I guess that's why they call them rock turtles. That's probably why the last time I went to skip a rock across the lake...it bit me. Love you, A Perceptible Fav!
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Date: 2/22/2016 11:03:00 AM
Hi! my lovely friend wishing you a great congrats,bl
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Date: 2/22/2016 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:32:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful thought. Enjoyed reading it. TFS
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Date: 2/22/2016 12:40:00 AM
Unique perception n beautiful too.....
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Date: 2/22/2016 12:19:00 AM
Very intriguing perception. I think the phrase "rock turtles" is pretty cool. Congrats.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:20:00 PM
Imperceptible...nicely played :) I like your take on this one, creative...nice win.
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:11:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Andrea..
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:44:00 PM
Andrea,, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 2/21/2016 9:43:00 PM
Hi, Andrea, this was creative. :) LOL.I had to double look right now...LOL, You need glasses, THEM ARE ROCKS! LOLOL.... I'm so kidding with you. I Like what you see, after reading your line, I SEE IT TOO.... you are awesome. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:19:00 PM
Beautiful poem on "Rock turtles". Wish you good luck my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:48:00 AM
Them turtles jist don't know how to rock. Cool baby, cool. Love, daver
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Date: 2/21/2016 10:26:00 AM
After a long time,and voila you are still at your best Andrea.
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