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Rock turtles in blue waters . . .their crawl so slow it’s imperceptible


2/20/2016  Based on a beautiful picture of a New England shoreline.

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James Tate

Date: 1/2/2018 10:04:00 AM

Clever, Andrea. If I swam near a rock turtle and it moved, I'd break Mark Whatshisname's record.

Carole Duet

Date: 12/29/2017 4:04:00 PM

Great Monoku, Andrea!

Karen Croft

Date: 9/2/2017 7:31:00 AM

very nice

Verlecia Fields

Date: 8/14/2017 9:59:00 AM

congrats on your win - i like how you can see the turtles in the blue water

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/6/2017 2:10:00 AM

congrats on your win :)

Sheol Moribund

Date: 3/21/2016 6:55:00 PM

I like it! Great job. Bravo!!!

Jai Bankson

Date: 3/16/2016 3:27:00 AM

Congrats on your Monoku win7.5

Len Gasun

Date: 2/28/2016 6:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win and this very wonderful monuko my dear friend, Andrea! Yes, I agree with our dear friend, Paul. Rock turtles made your poem unique and brilliant! Congrats once again! Hugs and cheers! love lots, GL

Paul Callus

Date: 2/28/2016 3:57:00 AM

I missed this one before; glad to be reading it now...your rock turtles are quite unique! Congratulations on your fine win:) // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/23/2016 8:03:00 PM

Well Andrea, congratulations on your win in the contest. This is an excellent Monoku. It is so easy to understand this one when one looks at the picture. The way the Monoku is written, one would understand it without the picture. Excellent. A Seven and into my Faves....Mike.

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/23/2016 2:19:00 PM

Hey Andrea, those turtles rock..' Oh and another winner.!

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 2/23/2016 7:46:00 AM

See what I mean? in those few words, you have grabbed my imagination and given it floaties.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 2/22/2016 1:17:00 PM

I guess that's why they call them rock turtles. That's probably why the last time I went to skip a rock across the lake...it bit me. Love you, A Perceptible Fav!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/22/2016 11:03:00 AM

Hi! my lovely friend wishing you a great congrats,bl

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 2/22/2016 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your wonderful win in "In one line (monoku #7) write what you SEE or FEEL" contest. You are truly amazing! :) -hans

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 2/22/2016 1:32:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful thought. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/22/2016 12:40:00 AM

Unique perception n beautiful too.....

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/22/2016 12:19:00 AM

Very intriguing perception. I think the phrase "rock turtles" is pretty cool. Congrats.

Sam Jameson

Date: 2/21/2016 10:20:00 PM

Imperceptible...nicely played :) I like your take on this one, creative...nice win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/21/2016 10:11:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this wonderful monoku Andrea..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 9:44:00 PM

Andrea,, Congratulations on your awesome one line verse (monoku) what you SEE or FEEL win. It's an honor to have you support my contest once again. Stop by and enjoy my blog "Ashamed" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2016 9:43:00 PM

Hi, Andrea, this was creative. :) LOL.I had to double look right now...LOL, You need glasses, THEM ARE ROCKS! LOLOL.... I'm so kidding with you. I Like what you see, after reading your line, I SEE IT TOO.... you are awesome. Love LINDA

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/21/2016 3:19:00 PM

Beautiful poem on "Rock turtles". Wish you good luck my lovely friend,bl

Daver Austin

Date: 2/21/2016 10:48:00 AM

Them turtles jist don't know how to rock. Cool baby, cool. Love, daver