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Rock Musician

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Chris Green

Date: 1/6/2017 6:46:00 AM

Sounds good so far, kind of dark and deep, just like a good heavy rock song should be. Do you have a melody in mind?

Holly Bohto
Date: 1/6/2017 9:15:00 AM

That's Gary's Department to come up with a melody. He's the rock guitarist. And he's a songwriter. Thanks Chris.