Robins Flying South

robins flying south detour to stop in wet yards-- a quick meal and bath © cgh nov 2011 for Deb’s contest

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/18/2011 2:18:00 PM

such a cute picture this one conjures up, congratulations on your win, and thank you for my placement in your 'strict haiku' contest...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:08:00 PM

this one was so cute. Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 11:15:00 AM

Congratulations Charles on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/15/2011 6:25:00 PM

GRRRRRREEEEEAAAAAT. tHIS IS TOO AMAZING FOR WORDS, CHARLES. AWESOME HAIKU. TELL THEM BIRDS TO SWING BY MY FEEDER! gWENDOLEN

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/15/2011 8:51:00 AM

such a charming win! what a mental picture CONGRAD's Light & Love

Rick Parise

Date: 11/13/2011 7:22:00 PM

Nice imagery!!!Oregon has lots and lots of beautiful robins..love'm (SOUPMAIL)

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/12/2011 9:22:00 AM

I really like your Haiku's Charles. I find myself lying in bed creating them. Two lines then I say to myself. Do the cut! I understand them much better now than ever before.Thank you for my placement in your Strict Haiku contest. I have added you to my list of fav poets. I hope that is okay?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/11/2011 10:43:00 PM

A cute one. Sounds like they made a motel stop!