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Robin Redbreast

Robin Redbreast

Spring is here, and the robins appear
With morning and evening song in the air.

A robin redbreast perched in a tree
Sings a song for his lady bird-to-be,
Undeterred, as he awaits her answer,
Crescendoing to drown out the others.
His heart afire, his senses alert,
He preens his feathers between the chirps
And breathes deep as his chest puffs out;
Then, music vocals produced by the syrinx
Flow out from his bill, calling to his sweetheart
In refrains to arouse her curiosity.

And if successful, she’ll fly in his direction
To check out his worthiness and description.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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April 30, 2023 at 3:16 PM
A beautiful poem, Dennis. Your mental imagery and thoughts are both very relevant and beautifully stated.
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May 1, 2023 at 5:17 AM
Thank you for your generous comment. Sincerely appreciated.
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April 30, 2023 at 10:45 AM
Hello Denis, oh, Denis, this is beautifully done. I am making this poem my fav. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
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May 2, 2023 at 10:44 AM
Hello Denis, I made this poem my fav. Take care my friend./Darlene/
Spilchuk Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 4:55 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Darlene, and I'm flattered that you enjoyed the poem. Take care.
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