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Robin Redbreast Spring is here, and the robins appear With morning and evening song in the air. A robin redbreast perched in a tree Sings a song for his lady bird to be, Undeterred, as he awaits her answer, Crescendoing to drown out the others. His heart afire, his senses alert He preens his feathers between the chirps, And breathes deep as his chest puffs out Then, music vocals produced by the syrinx Flow out from his bill, calling to his sweetheart In refrains to arouse her curiosity. And if successful, she’ll fly in his direction To check out his worthiness and description.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 4/30/2023 3:16:00 PM
A beautiful poem, Dennis. Your mental imagery and thoughts are both very relevant and beautifully stated.
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/1/2023 5:17:00 AM
Thank you for your generous comment. Sincerely appreciated.
Date: 4/30/2023 10:45:00 AM
Hello Denis, oh, Denis, this is beautifully done. I am making this poem my fav. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/2/2023 10:44:00 AM
Hello Denis, I made this poem my fav. Take care my friend./Darlene/
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Dennis Spilchuk
Date: 5/1/2023 4:55:00 AM
Thank you for your encouraging comment, Darlene, and I'm flattered that you enjoyed the poem. Take care.

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