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Robin On Song

A winsome warbler,
whose flutelike jingles boost moods,
despite cloudy clime
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Onclaud Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 9:49 PM
the power of this ' ku lies in the clarity and sharp 'aha' of your voice, howard...for sotto's challenge? winning wishes!
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 10:50 PM
Nette, A generous comment such as yours is encouraging and a spur.. Grateful for your winning wishes. Best of luck to you as well in your endeavours. Howard
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 10:49 PM
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 9:25 AM
And the alliteration was entertaining! Fave
Kamoonpuri Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 8:03 AM
Aww yes yayyy anyday, this is my fav poem today as it so delights my bird lover heart. Kudos for this short n sweet one! >>>>>>>><<<<<<<^--_Plz plz also read and comment on my newest poem
Kendrick Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Yes, those warblers are nice birds to have around, Howard. I don't know if I could identify their songs though. Thanks for sharing this with us. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 5:36 AM
My pleasure when it comes to sharing ny works. I value your slants, Sara. Howard
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 5:01 AM
Nice musical haiku.
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 6:03 AM
I appreciate that comment, Alison. Thanks for your visit. Howard
Swan Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 4:24 AM
The outdoor sound that make beauty in the grey. Nice Haiku.
Kerr Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 4:55 AM
Thank you so very much for your visit and comment, Jeanette. I welcome that. H
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