Robin Hood and H G

Robin Hood was captured
Thrown in the castle cells
Here he met an inmate
By the name of H.G.Wells.
Herbert George is fascinated
By the story our Robin has to tell
but he knows Robin will be executed 
When the church sounds the morning bell.

So that night together
As the guards around them dream
Herbert George and Robin
Escape in H.G's time machine.
They set a course for the future
March 27th 2014'
Robin so excited 
To be seeing things he's never seen .

All his hopes are soaring 
Thinking about the things he hopes to see
Fair wages and taxation 
and an end to poverty.
But what he finds tears him apart
In this age of depravity 
The super rich are just as greedy 
and the peasants as poor as they ever used to be.

All Robin see's are broken promises 
Nothing much has changed
Conservative, Republican , Communist or Democrat 
Favours for the super rich are still arranged.
Politicians feathering their own nest 
Against the poorest all weapons are ranged
Yet we have no modern day Robin Hood 
Even H.G. thought that strange.

Back to the time machine 
Robin has never felt so low 
All the things he fought against 
With just a few arrows and a bow 
Are just as prevalent in the future
and after thanking H.G. for the show
A broken hearted Robin Hood 
Climbed the steps to the sheriffs gallows.

As he stood astride the trap door
Returned H.G's time machine 
Herbert whisks Robin off to Eden 
A garden beautiful and green 
Here he learns the lord never intended
For man to be so mean 
He now knows the poor will inherit gods mansions 
The super rich for eternity will scream .


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/28/2014 12:16:00 PM
Hey, Darren, I like this story of Robin, WOW! What a twisting ending...... The Time Machine, was clever .............I kind of feel sad for him.... and the dreams.... Hugs~ Linda
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/28/2014 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Linda , I feel sorry for him too . Sad thing is that some of those worship the buck will be in church on Sunday pretending to believe .
Date: 3/28/2014 10:03:00 AM
A delightful post with a poerful messageDaz
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/28/2014 3:28:00 PM
Or even got worse ..Yes so true
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/28/2014 1:07:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine . The legend would have us believe that Robin fought against greed and injustice , If he did come back today I think he would find little has changed.
Date: 3/28/2014 1:16:00 AM
Having read it in its full glory really is an awesome narrative had me hooked from beginning to end. Jan x
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/28/2014 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Jan , I changed the ending after reading SKAT'S comments . but glad I did now .
Date: 3/27/2014 10:33:00 PM
Darren, wow, you took this one everywhere. Poor Robin, I wonder if death was the only way out..... enjoyed . Hugs ~SKAT~
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/27/2014 11:56:00 PM
He got a last minute reprieve gorgeous .
Date: 3/27/2014 3:04:00 PM
and and and what happens next? - get on with it big fella. Hugs Stan x
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/28/2014 1:14:00 AM
Old girl - pah am not ready for the coffin yet mate! hugs Stan x
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/27/2014 8:15:00 PM
Patience old girl, lol
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