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Robin

savor of fresh rain
bird house fastened to tree trunk~
beak full of earthworms

nestlings bulging cheeks
leaves its nest gravity pulls~
prompt upward movement

2/12/2023

Spring Flower, Bird Or Butterfly Haiku X 2 Poetry Contest.
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Kendrick Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Little ones in flight. Congratulations on this winning work. Thanks for sharing. Sara
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 12:49 PM
- The sound of spring :) - Beautifully written, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Kauffman Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 10:29 AM
What beautiful imagery lives in the lines of your haiku, Eve! Truly the robin is a harbinger of spring - a sign to the world of warm days, new flowers and green trees! Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away..........................
Kitchin Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 4:06 AM
Eve, a sweet set of Robin haiku's, congratulations on your winning placement!
Buhagiar Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 2:21 AM
Your haikus are excellent. I am sure of a win.
Poet Avatar
February 12, 2023 at 4:12 PM
Well-written haiku set, Eve. You conveyed such a beautiful scene in both of them. Good luck with the contest
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