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red breast beats chirp songs tune cascades in first sunray… thrushes are silent ________________ March 15, 2022 Syllable count : 5/7/5 (HMS) Contest : Bird Haiku Sponsored by : Tania kitchin
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Goldsmith Avatar
March 29, 2022 at 1:20 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write and a beautiful bird. Have a blessed day.............
Roper Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 9:19 PM
Great imagery, Subimal , congratulations on your win on Tania Kitchin's Bird Haiku contest.
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March 28, 2022 at 8:55 PM
Congratulations, Subimal!
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2022 at 6:11 AM
Congrats on this winner. I wonder why the thrush is silent? I enjoyed reading this one. Way to go. Sara
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March 27, 2022 at 4:30 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku!
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