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Roaring Waves

like a lion's roar
 the sea echoes  in seashells 
 crumbling sandcastles

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2013

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June 7, 2017 at 12:45 AM

i feel the magical echo sound of the sea on this piece, Joseph. Congrats!

June 5, 2017 at 2:00 AM

An excellent three liner, Joseph. Congratulations on this fine win. Regards // paul

June 4, 2017 at 5:16 PM

Love this image! Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2013 at 11:40 PM

this is outstanding work, Joseph. LOVE IT.even better on my second time seeing it!! Congrats.

July 22, 2013 at 5:45 PM

VERY interesting last line...Congratulations sir - Tim

July 22, 2013 at 2:39 PM

Interesting approach to the contest...Congrats on your great win..Sara

July 22, 2013 at 12:43 PM

Picturesque! Congratulations Joseph

July 22, 2013 at 11:36 AM

Good one Joseph.Congrats on your win.

Connie Gildersleeve

July 22, 2013 at 6:41 AM

Joseph congratulations on your fantastic haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 22, 2013 at 1:08 AM

- A winning haiku, with great quality, Joseph !! - CONGRATULATIONS! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

July 21, 2013 at 10:53 PM

So imaginative and lovely. Congrats Joseph.

Poet Destroyer A

July 21, 2013 at 8:00 PM

Joseph, :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA

July 22, 2013 at 6:23 AM

Thank you for my placement in your contest PD

Black Eyed Susan

April 20, 2013 at 12:54 AM

nice use of sound... best wishes in the contest joseph :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 18, 2013 at 3:36 PM

nice one. I can hear them roar!

April 13, 2013 at 9:51 PM

I like this Joseph ..can almost hear it....Donna

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