Roaring Confusion

hot night's sounds of fan
                                                out side all around raining
                                                      roaring confusion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 11:32 PM
ha, to the roaring confusion.... PD
Anish Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 5:44 PM
I like the phrase "roaring confusion" . It is a good way to describe a downpour. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Devnath  Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 6:03 PM
Many thanks for your visit to my page and for your comment. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 11:38 PM
Now THIS one is very understandable. I really like this, BL. Rain on a hot night must be a very hot day too.
Devnath  Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 8:23 AM
My friend, I become confused sometimes with the sound of rain and sound of fan in my room. It it raining or not? Thanks for reading and for your comment on my write. Loved always, bl
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