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Road Trip

An actuary does the math And figures out the time Each person gets to live his life Before he leaves his prime. Of course, an average doesn’t mean That everyone’s the same, So some of us will stay alive Beyond statistic’s claim. Yet knowing what I know, as years Accumulate and pass, The time to travel’s NOW before Death bites me in the ass. And so I pack my bags, a road trip Waiting ‘round the bend, Some sights to see we haven’t seen Is what we do intend. The actuary’s formula May hold a lot of truth, But even I can do the math When I subtract my youth!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/4/2015 10:41:00 AM
What a marvelous read from a blessed paged built on lines constructed with the lyrics of the skies and words well supported by dynamic foamy clouds. Message well expressed! No doubt an absolute 7##.
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Date: 6/1/2015 11:40:00 PM
This is great ilene.... I'm not ready to go...got lots of sightseeing still to do
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Date: 6/1/2015 8:45:00 PM
GIRL! Now I know what above and beyond duty means...GIRL! wow wow wow
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Date: 6/1/2015 8:09:00 PM
G'day Ilene... another fine poem with the message; live each day as if it is your last - thanks Ilene - Lindsay
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Date: 6/1/2015 4:05:00 PM
Clever write as ever Ilene - none of us know what is around the next corner so grab those road trips whilst you can:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
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