Road Trip

R-iding in a fast and coolest BMW,
O-verwhelmed by the fantastic view,
A-nother experience to be with nature,
D-azzling scenery, greenest earth so pure,

T-rip with a great mission in reality,
R-oads are smoothest away from the city,
I-nteresting discovery as we travel along,
P-eople are awesome as my companion. 


August 24, 2013
7th Place Winner
For Kim Merryman's "Road Trip" Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Guzzi Avatar
December 31, 2013 at 4:14 PM
Happy New Year my friend Light & Love
A  Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Maria, , Congratulations on your win ~SKAT~
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:30 PM
a lovely trip described here. I love that car you are in!! congrats
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:50 AM
congrats on your win :)
Morgan Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Hi Maria, this is a wonderful winning poem... Linda
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 8:57 PM
Maria, thank you for supporting my contest and congrats on your win! Good work! Love, Kim
Mohammed Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Hi Maria, this sounds like a grand trip. Please take me along next time. Very nice my friend.
Pratap Avatar
August 28, 2013 at 1:08 AM
GREAT WRK enjoyed it do visit my wrk smtyms ~V~
Sathasivam Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM
Excellent. Sound as great trip. Well penned. ENjoyed. Tfs
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2013 at 9:07 AM
Good evening my dear friend Maria! *I'm extremely happy to read a new & outstanding poem again from you. While reading this, i feel like going to travel again :) thank you so much for sharing. This is a winner for me. Belated congrats for your wins as well. I'm so sorry if i come only now. Hope you're doing well. (me? mai sabai naka loko mi panha). Well, but I know God loves us. Thank you so much for your great writes & everything! Big sweet hugs! Tcare! love much, Leonora
Babu Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 4:28 AM
............ SO NICE ..TRIP........$@#%#@
Gigno Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 9:55 PM
!!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 8:32 PM
very nice, Maria. Put an -ed on the word "overwhelmed"!!
Liwayway Avatar
August 24, 2013 at 2:54 AM
many thanks friend Andrea, actually I wrote it with ed on my notebook but when I typed and posted it here I didn't put it...(^_____^) Have a nice weekend. hugs
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2013 at 11:19 AM
- Sounded like a "cool girl trip" ... Well done, you are talented! - Wishing you a beautiful weekend, Maria .... relax! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace