Shadow Hamilton Poet Acrostic

Road Trip

Rolling down the dusty unmade road
Over the rackety bridge we rode
A slow trickle of water under it flowed
Driving on even though the road narrowed

Tranquillity not at all overshadowed
Room to breath without feeling harrowed
Inner paths stretch leading to the highroad
Places now flash by, some of them hallowed

written 08/18/2013

contest Road Trip

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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu August 23, 2013 at 5:33 AM Solid monorhyme. Acrostic to crown it all. Check out the rhythm. Oh! Blessed poetry! Shadow Hamilton August 23, 2013 at 3:54 PM hi Alozor Ty for taking time to read my work appreciated Shadow x smile

Donna Jones August 18, 2013 at 5:00 PM Nice ROAD TRIP write Shadow...good luck in the contest... Shadow Hamilton August 23, 2013 at 3:55 PM Ty Donna gl to you also Shadow x smile

Bl Devnath August 18, 2013 at 10:08 AM Beautiful road trip enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl Shadow Hamilton August 18, 2013 at 3:14 PM Ty Bl gl to you too Shadow x smile

Mustapha Mohammed August 17, 2013 at 8:01 PM Smooth transition of thoughts my friend.A lovely piece,good luck in the contest. Shadow Hamilton August 18, 2013 at 3:16 PM dearest M.M how are you? Ty dear for your kind comments Love Shadow xox smile