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Road Trip

Rolling down the dusty unmade road Over the rackety bridge we rode A slow trickle of water under it flowed Driving on even though the road narrowed Tranquillity not at all overshadowed Room to breath without feeling harrowed Inner paths stretch leading to the highroad Places now flash by, some of them hallowed written 08/18/2013 contest Road Trip

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Date: 8/23/2013 5:33:00 AM
Solid monorhyme. Acrostic to crown it all. Check out the rhythm. Oh! Blessed poetry!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2013 3:54:00 PM
hi Alozor Ty for taking time to read my work appreciated Shadow x smile
Date: 8/18/2013 5:00:00 PM
Nice ROAD TRIP write Shadow...good luck in the contest...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2013 3:55:00 PM
Ty Donna gl to you also Shadow x smile
Date: 8/18/2013 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful road trip enjoyed. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/18/2013 3:14:00 PM
Ty Bl gl to you too Shadow x smile
Date: 8/17/2013 8:01:00 PM
Smooth transition of thoughts my friend.A lovely piece,good luck in the contest.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 8/18/2013 3:16:00 PM
dearest M.M how are you? Ty dear for your kind comments Love Shadow xox smile

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