Road Trip

Overloaded van by
My nutty family!
Passengers, all ages,
Destination Disney
Land, pop songs blaring high
Reached Las Vegas instead!

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Silent One

May 8, 2025 at 7:14 AM

Sounds like an interesting trip with lots of interesting experiences a long the way...

Malabika Ray Choudhury

May 8, 2025 at 2:40 PM

Ha ha! Kids are grown-up now, no more road trips!

Ink Empress

May 7, 2025 at 9:12 PM

Sounds like a fun and lovely trip, with loved ones altho it did end in vegas. Dear Mala, its so good to read your poem today , youv told us a story in few lines in such a creative manner. Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always

Malabika Ray Choudhury

May 9, 2025 at 7:24 AM

Dear Empress, so good to see your comment! We used to have many crazy road trips before. Kids are grown-up, not any more. Recently got busy with a writing project, trying short poems - I always enjoy reading your poems with brilliant imageries. Hope you have a lovely summer! Love ~