Road Trip

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May 7, 2025

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Overloaded van by My nutty family! Passengers, all ages, Destination Disney Land, pop songs blaring high Reached Las Vegas instead!

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Silent One

Date: 5/8/2025 7:14:00 AM

Sounds like an interesting trip with lots of interesting experiences a long the way...

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/8/2025 2:40:00 PM

Ha ha! Kids are grown-up now, no more road trips!

Ink Empress

Date: 5/7/2025 9:12:00 PM

Sounds like a fun and lovely trip, with loved ones altho it did end in vegas. Dear Mala, its so good to read your poem today , youv told us a story in few lines in such a creative manner. Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/9/2025 7:24:00 AM

Dear Empress, so good to see your comment! We used to have many crazy road trips before. Kids are grown-up, not any more. Recently got busy with a writing project, trying short poems - I always enjoy reading your poems with brilliant imageries. Hope you have a lovely summer! Love ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/7/2025 4:19:00 PM

Hello Mala, so how was Disney? I hopeevr4yn had a great time. Love & Friendship, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/8/2025 10:36:00 AM

Hello Mala, Oh! I thought it was recent. anyway everyone has a great time at Disney . Lover & Friendship, /Darlene/

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/7/2025 6:03:00 PM

That was a long long time ago, Darlene! Now the kids are all grown-up, and we don't drive that far any more! Love and friendship, Sweet Friend!