Charlie Knowlton Poet Footle

Road Trip

Long drive
                                    route 5

                                    Tank fill
                                    road kill
          
                                    4 door
                                    billboard

                                    Gas cap
                                    road map

                                    Eat here
                                    just veer

                                    Motel
                                    ring bell

                                    Off ramp
                                    hose clamp
     
                                    Break down
                                    ghost town

                                    Phone home
                                    need loan

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Caren Krutsinger November 27, 2018 at 2:10 PM Hilarious ending! I am going to try to figure out the pattern, and "borrow" it if you do not mind. A sing-song-y write. Charlie Knowlton February 17, 2019 at 10:10 AM Late getting back to you Caren…Did not realize until today that you commented…Feel free to use as you like.

Lawrence Sharp September 3, 2018 at 10:11 AM Brisk, rhythmic and wry, great write. Lawrence Sharp September 3, 2018 at 11:56 PM South Africa's warming up, and hopefully some rain in the next few weeks will wash the dust out of the Jo'burg air. I imagine New England will soon be a little cold ? Charlie Knowlton September 3, 2018 at 3:41 PM Thanks Lawrence!…How`s everything in S. Africa?…I think it`s great making friends in other continents.

Arturo Michael September 2, 2018 at 6:35 PM It sounds like a real experience...nice write... Charlie Knowlton September 2, 2018 at 7:24 PM Thank you Arturo…I don't always respond but love your religious and romantic poems…They truly sound like they come from the heart.