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Road Trip

Long drive route 5 Tank fill road kill 4 door billboard Gas cap road map Eat here just veer Motel ring bell Off ramp hose clamp Break down ghost town Phone home need loan

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 11/27/2018 2:10:00 PM

Hilarious ending! I am going to try to figure out the pattern, and "borrow" it if you do not mind. A sing-song-y write.

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 2/17/2019 10:10:00 AM

Late getting back to you Caren…Did not realize until today that you commented…Feel free to use as you like.

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 9/3/2018 10:11:00 AM

Brisk, rhythmic and wry, great write.

Lawrence Sharp
Date: 9/3/2018 11:56:00 PM

South Africa's warming up, and hopefully some rain in the next few weeks will wash the dust out of the Jo'burg air. I imagine New England will soon be a little cold ?

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 9/3/2018 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Lawrence!…How`s everything in S. Africa?…I think it`s great making friends in other continents.

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/2/2018 6:35:00 PM

It sounds like a real experience...nice write...

Charlie Knowlton
Date: 9/2/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thank you Arturo…I don't always respond but love your religious and romantic poems…They truly sound like they come from the heart.