Ilene Bauer Poet Rhyme

Riveting

When I’m wearing jeans with rivets,
Which is like a fashion thing,
Does the fact I’m wearing rivets
Make me much more riveting?

I suspect the answer’s equal
To the men all sporting studs.
Sometimes thoughts that feel like firecrackers
Turn out to be duds.

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Mike Dailey February 26, 2014 at 1:13 PM I could not help myself - I think in rhyme. I didn't even bother to write them down prior to posting or save them in my journal Mike

Mike Dailey February 26, 2014 at 8:44 AM As I sit at my desk dressed all in my sweats This time of the morning, that's as good as it gets If we are defined by the clothes that we wear What about nudists? Should I not go there? Ilene Bauer February 26, 2014 at 11:24 AM it amazed me that i'm getting comments that are worthy of being posted as poems on their own merit. this one is a gem! thank you, mike...

Robert Johnson February 25, 2014 at 10:22 PM I feel the need to let you know. It's not the rivet's that steal the show. For I don't think we men much care just what's holding together that pair. Peace. :) Ilene Bauer February 26, 2014 at 11:23 AM ha! you're doing your best to out-clever me, robert, and you're definitely succeeding. thank you..........

Demetrios Trifiatis February 25, 2014 at 7:35 AM No matter what you are wearing dear Ilene, I am certain you the attention of men attracts! Beautiful! Ilene Bauer February 26, 2014 at 11:21 AM thank you so much, demetrios! how sweet of you!