Riveting

When I’m wearing jeans with rivets, Which is like a fashion thing, Does the fact I’m wearing rivets Make me much more riveting? I suspect the answer’s equal To the men all sporting studs. Sometimes thoughts that feel like firecrackers Turn out to be duds.

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Mike Dailey

Date: 2/26/2014 1:13:00 PM

I could not help myself - I think in rhyme. I didn't even bother to write them down prior to posting or save them in my journal Mike

Mike Dailey

Date: 2/26/2014 8:44:00 AM

As I sit at my desk dressed all in my sweats This time of the morning, that's as good as it gets If we are defined by the clothes that we wear What about nudists? Should I not go there?

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/26/2014 11:24:00 AM

it amazed me that i'm getting comments that are worthy of being posted as poems on their own merit. this one is a gem! thank you, mike...

Robert Johnson

Date: 2/25/2014 10:22:00 PM

I feel the need to let you know. It's not the rivet's that steal the show. For I don't think we men much care just what's holding together that pair. Peace. :)

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/26/2014 11:23:00 AM

ha! you're doing your best to out-clever me, robert, and you're definitely succeeding. thank you..........

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/25/2014 7:35:00 AM

No matter what you are wearing dear Ilene, I am certain you the attention of men attracts! Beautiful!

Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/26/2014 11:21:00 AM

thank you so much, demetrios! how sweet of you!