Rivers of Ink

Rivers of ink run through my pen,
chasing epiphany round the bend.



5/21/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ligon Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:44 PM
This is clever.
Awtry Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 6:16 PM
Thank you :)
Ashley Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 8:44 PM
Oh, I love this! Your poetic brevity is inspiring, P.S. A metaphoric beauty. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Awtry Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Thank you Susan. You are very kind :) -ps
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 5:02 PM
this is fantastic crystalline!!
Awtry Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Thank you very much :) -ps
Tefft Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 6:15 AM
Very, very nice! I like this one a bunch. Good job!
Awtry Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Stephen :) ~ps
Romios Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 1:59 AM
Hi P.S., Very well penned! Panagiota
Awtry Avatar
May 22, 2019 at 7:59 AM
Thank you Panagiota :) ~ps
Mcguire Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 7:32 PM
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! Sometimes we have an epiphany and other days we don't catch one. A FAV for me.
Awtry Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Thank you so much! :) -ps
Krutsinger Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 5:46 PM
Now I want to write a crystalline too! I am truly going to look up crystalline to try to remember for I like this poem that much!
Awtry Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 5:52 PM
thank you thank you! Is there higher praise than that! :) ~ps
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:50 PM
Hello P.S. Awtry, well said my friend. Have a nice day my friend.
Awtry Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 5:12 PM
Thank you Darlene! Hope you are having a beautiful day :). -ps
Kiser Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 2:10 PM
Had to "fav"; love it; especially that last line!
Awtry Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Thank you ML! So glad you liked it! :)~ps
Wolf Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 12:01 PM
I'm sure you've caught an epiphany or two with this nice extended metaphor. Works so well. ~ gw
Awtry Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 1:28 PM
I woke up this morning with that in my head. Fortunately it was short and I could get it written down before I forgot it!
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