Rivers Meet

Allured glimmer from sparkling lip
your face to touch with finger tip,
through meadows fanned by fragrant breeze
along winding lanes that appease,
here waters blend in melody
together stroll in hymnody,
on one's way to the mighty sea
to be welcomed by waves of glee.

© Harry J Horsman  2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/9/2012 1:06:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much. I felt I had to take a breath and read in one. It worked for me. God bless. Oh thanks for your comments. Dave.
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:24:00 AM
A great write Harry and such a romantic eye full , all the best my Friend , Declan ....
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Date: 1/29/2012 11:36:00 PM
This is absolutely beautiful... thanks for sharing!!
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Date: 1/29/2012 9:08:00 AM
Excellent, Harry. Great write. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comments. Best to you and yours. Have a great week, Mate. Ralph
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Date: 1/28/2012 8:50:00 AM
lovely stirring words of dynamic imagery and flow.. visualizing this one .. so beautiful streaming through creative world.. luv..
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Date: 1/26/2012 7:47:00 PM
beautiful harry. i can hear the rivers meet. thanks for stopping by and your kind comments.
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:11:00 PM
Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2012 12:01:00 PM
Very rhythmic flow, I like it.. Muzz
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Date: 1/26/2012 11:02:00 AM
hymnody? try looking this up.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/26/2012 2:07:00 PM
hymnody, songs of praise, to me the sound of running waters.
Date: 1/26/2012 10:12:00 AM
Wonderful flow to this lovely poem Harry. Elizabeth
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Date: 1/26/2012 6:45:00 AM
A lovely picture of sparkling lip's magic imagined wonderfully. Loved and enjoyed, bl
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