Rivers Meet

Allured glimmer from sparkling lip
your face to touch with finger tip,
through meadows fanned by fragrant breeze
along winding lanes that appease,
here waters blend in melody
together stroll in hymnody,
on one's way to the mighty sea
to be welcomed by waves of glee.

© Harry J Horsman  2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Timperley Avatar
February 9, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Enjoyed your poem very much. I felt I had to take a breath and read in one. It worked for me. God bless. Oh thanks for your comments. Dave.
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January 31, 2012 at 10:24 AM
A great write Harry and such a romantic eye full , all the best my Friend , Declan ....
Telling Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 11:36 PM
This is absolutely beautiful... thanks for sharing!!
Taylor Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 9:08 AM
Excellent, Harry. Great write. Enjoyed. Thanks for your comments. Best to you and yours. Have a great week, Mate. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 8:50 AM
lovely stirring words of dynamic imagery and flow.. visualizing this one .. so beautiful streaming through creative world.. luv..
. Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 7:47 PM
beautiful harry. i can hear the rivers meet. thanks for stopping by and your kind comments.
Brown Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:11 PM
Wow everyone has found the inspiration to write today even me. Thank you for posting and sharing your poetry with us today. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. Keep them coming Harry. Love, Carol
Mahauariki Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 12:01 PM
Very rhythmic flow, I like it.. Muzz
Situation Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 11:02 AM
hymnody? try looking this up.
Horsman Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 2:07 PM
hymnody, songs of praise, to me the sound of running waters.
Scholtz Avatar
January 26, 2012 at 10:12 AM
Wonderful flow to this lovely poem Harry. Elizabeth
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January 26, 2012 at 6:45 AM
A lovely picture of sparkling lip's magic imagined wonderfully. Loved and enjoyed, bl
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