River's Edge

Placid icy waters flow
Rhythmically laps the shore
Knitting icy lace


Tim Peterson, 12/2/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 30, 2016 at 1:34 PM
Beautiful!
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December 7, 2014 at 7:33 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tim - I choose your first great written Haiku - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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December 5, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Master of Haiku: Bud in sun hot flame As wonderfully you came, All know your name…
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December 2, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Descriptive! Made me care, because you cared about words describing the cold water waves!
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December 2, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Thank you. I was walking along the during my lunch break,stopped to enjoy the scene and wrote the poem while I finished my walk.
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December 2, 2014 at 2:07 PM
such beautiful imagery:-) Hugs jan x
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December 2, 2014 at 8:58 PM
Thank you. This is the first Haiku I have ever shared.
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