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River's Edge

Placid icy waters flow Rhythmically laps the shore Knitting icy lace Tim Peterson, 12/2/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/30/2016 1:34:00 PM
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Beautiful!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2014 7:33:00 AM
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- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tim - I choose your first great written Haiku - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too - Keep the PoetrySoup as a haven - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ovidiu Bocsa
Date: 12/5/2014 9:57:00 AM
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Master of Haiku: Bud in sun hot flame As wonderfully you came, All know your name…
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Chaim Wilson
Date: 12/2/2014 7:46:00 PM
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Descriptive! Made me care, because you cared about words describing the cold water waves!
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Tim Peterson
Date: 12/2/2014 9:00:00 PM
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Thank you. I was walking along the during my lunch break,stopped to enjoy the scene and wrote the poem while I finished my walk.
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/2/2014 2:07:00 PM
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such beautiful imagery:-) Hugs jan x
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Tim Peterson
Date: 12/2/2014 8:58:00 PM
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Thank you. This is the first Haiku I have ever shared.

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