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River Walk

on muggy morning
a momentous river walk
lulls our fresh sweet dream





Aug 27, 2014   12.50 pm






First Place
Contest: Solo Epic Senryu/Haiku-River Walk
Judged: 9/15/14
Sponsor: My Beloved Poet, PD

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Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2015 at 10:16 PM

Where are you, and how are you my wonderful sis... MISS YOU.... LINDA

Len Gasun

April 11, 2015 at 10:29 AM

Hi, my beloved sis! I'm sorry if I just read and reply this now. I'm always here my dearest sis. Sending you many hugs and smiles from me. Love you.

Poet Destroyer A

March 21, 2015 at 5:52 PM

LEONORA, MY WONDERFUL POET SIS... HOW ARE YOU... MISS YOU... WHERE ARE YOU??? YOUR BFF.... LINDA

Len Gasun

March 24, 2015 at 10:51 AM

Hello my most wonderful and beloved poet sis and as always, my all time number 1 favourite poetess and BFF! I'm here now. How are you? Miss you as well and I'm so sorry if I only came now. Was so engrossed with my school works/assignments especially in my research work regarding my subject Mathematics. Each one of us (my colleagues) were required to submit. But, thanks God, I'm off to school for 5 days before summer class starts on March 30. I miss you so much. I kept you in my thoughts and prayers.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

October 22, 2014 at 9:20 AM

That's great. pix adds dimension Bless.... rajat

Len Gasun

October 22, 2014 at 11:49 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend Rajat.

Connie Marcum Wong

September 15, 2014 at 3:36 PM

You probably are not speaking of San Antonio in your poem, but it reminds me of the lovely city and all its colorful lights and music on the river walk. A beautiful haiku!

Len Gasun

October 4, 2014 at 5:14 AM

In fact I didn't have any idea about San Antonio River Walk my dearest friend Connie. I'm so glad our dearest poet friend Linda appreciated it. Belated thank you so much. I am so elated and I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem and leave me a wonderful comment on it. It means a lot to me. Many hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 5:26 AM

- Beautiful dear Leonora! - Well deserved .... 1st place !!! - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:50 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise. Many warm congratulations on your win as well! Biggest sweet hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2014 at 10:38 PM

glad this one scored high. A well deserved win, sweetie pie.

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:49 AM

Thank you so much my very dear friend Andrea. Huge congratulations as well on your top win. It's an honor for me sharing it with you. Biggest sweet hugs!

Maurice Yvonne

September 6, 2014 at 11:07 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:47 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Maurice. Many warm congratulations on your wins as well. Big sweet hugs!

Faye Gibson

September 6, 2014 at 9:08 AM

A deep well to fall into, Leonora. Congrats.

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:46 AM

:) Thank you so much my dear friend Faye! Many congrats on your many wins as well! Big sweet hugs!

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 6, 2014 at 8:47 AM

Congratulations Leonora on this intriguing Haiku.

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:45 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Brenda. Many warm congratulations to you as well! Big sweet hugs!

Pandita Sietesantos

September 6, 2014 at 7:44 AM

Congratulations, Leonora, on the Top of the Class win! Well deserved with this excellent haiku! Pandita

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:44 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Pandita. Many congrats as well for your many wins! Big sweet hugs!

Jan Allison

September 6, 2014 at 6:48 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Leonora. It was great to read this again:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:43 AM

Thank you so much again my dear friend Jan. Many congrats as well on your many wins! Big sweet hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 6, 2014 at 5:00 AM

Visiting again to congratulate, leo.

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:41 AM

Thank you so much again my dear friend Dr. Ram. Many warm congrats as well for you many wins! Big sweet hugs back at you.

Casarah Nance

September 5, 2014 at 11:09 PM

Beautiful! Well done, many grats on your first place, this is the best one I have read so far :) sweet.

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:39 AM

Oh, thank you so much for the wonderful compliment my dear friend Casarah. Many sweet congrats as well for your many wins! Big sweet hugs back at you!

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:05 PM

Hello my dearest sis, and BFF.. First, I want to thank you for your lovely visits, once again. Now, I'm sending hugs, and smiling, after spotting your poem on my winning list. I enjoyed the refreshing dreams, sprouting from your haiku. My favorite of all haiku, for this contest... Glad it was your KU-Ku... Love ya, hugs to you my BFF... Congratulations, and enjoy my new blog, "You're a "River Legend, "" have a sweet day... Love LINDA

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:38 AM

Hi my forever loving sis and BFF. You are much welcome for my visit. It's always my honor and pleasure. Oh, thank you, thank you so much as well for everything and again for appreciating my haiku in your contest. Im so glad you liked it. I love you my everdearest sis-BFF. Sending many sweet hugs, smiles and kisses back at you. More blessings! God bless you always!

Andrea Dietrich

September 5, 2014 at 9:09 PM

hey girl. I am surprised to find one here I had overlooked. Nicely done!

Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:31 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear friend Andrea! Big hugs!

Ravi Sathasivam

September 1, 2014 at 6:38 AM

Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed, Tfs

Len Gasun

September 5, 2014 at 11:51 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Ravi. Big hugs!

Ravindra K Kapoor

August 29, 2014 at 11:01 AM

It’s a beauty you have created dear friend with the colors of Nature and solitude. Great Haiku I must. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for remembering me and leaving your kind and precious comments on my latest Poem. Love and best wishes always Leonora....Ravindra K Kapoor

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 10:48 AM

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and visit my dear friend Ravindra. Love and best wishes to you as well and thank you again for your delightful poems/songs. Huge sweet hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 28, 2014 at 11:03 AM

Lovely haiku Leonora! Best wishes always my dear!

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 10:31 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Upma. Best wishes always to you as well. I'll b back and visit you all soon ok cuz I'm recoverin fr flu right now. Have a blessed day always! Huge hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 28, 2014 at 5:30 AM

You create a very pleasant picture of solitude, Leo

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 10:27 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. Huge sweet hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen

August 28, 2014 at 3:24 AM

- Lovely haiku, well done ! - Luck in contest my friend Leonora !!! - I wish you a great day :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 10:24 AM

Belated thank you so much my very dear friend Anne Lise. Good luck in the many contests as well. Wishing you a great day too! ;)) I'll b back to visit you again soon, ok. Huge sweet hugs!

Maurice Yvonne

August 27, 2014 at 9:36 PM

it boggles the mind how many different haikus are being created from the one theme. this one is well thought out. a good read. thank you.

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 10:07 AM

Thank you so much for taking again your precious time to read my humble work my dear friend Maurice. Huge hugs back at you. I'll visit you soon and the rests here at soup. God bless!

Tim Smith

August 27, 2014 at 8:41 PM

I read it too...very nice...great imagery...hugs Tim

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 10:03 AM

Belated thank you so much again my dear friend Tim. Huge sweet hugs back at you!

Skat A

August 27, 2014 at 7:15 PM

Hello Sweet Leonora, long time no see. Nice Haiku, <--- that does not mean I did not read your KU.. :) It's just nice...SKAT

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 9:49 AM

Hi, my dearest Skat, i'm so happy to see you back! I miss you much. Biggest lovely hugs! Belated thank you for reading my Ku and taking your precious time stopping by with your inspiring comments. How are you dearest friend? Hope you'd a great vcation. Well, mind me, was quite fine but I'm recovering from flu rightnow. Hope i'll b much better soon. I'll b back & visit u soon, ok. Tytysm! More lovely hugs!

Jan Allison

August 27, 2014 at 7:10 PM

reads like a breath of fresh air to me:-) good luck in the contest. hugs jan xxx

Len Gasun

August 30, 2014 at 9:42 AM

Belated thanks my dear friend Jan. Good luck as well in the many contests. I'll be back soon to visit you ok. I'm stopping by for a while here. Got flu but getting better now. I still need to rest. I'll b back soon ok. Huge hugs!

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