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River Ubin

RIVER U.B.IN Watching from afar, he looked as gentle, sober and harmless as always. His bright smile, color and promising future was still present to see. This river i speak of ,although, capable of helping others Felt inferior as always River U.B.IN watched on as people passed him by to fetch his friends He beat himself up and saw himself as worthless and useless What is wrong with me, he asked. Am i not good enough? Does my content not produce beautiful taste ?? and satisfaction? Why do i not receive constant praises as my friends do? River U.B.IN could not fume any longer: He had been distracted He looked up and saw a man bending down to fetch him He carefully listened to the man's words as he fetched him "You may not be liked by everyone, but to me you're the best alive Your friends are not better than you because what you do, nobody can do same. I felt happy for U.B.IN because i loved him too But just like many others, he was unique (U) but(B) felt inferior (IN)

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Date: 3/29/2018 12:36:00 PM
It s a really nice written poem and I really like the message, because this is the story now a days, wealthy or handsome people are praise where as people act as if poors have no right to live, in God s eyes everybody is same, He created all us and this life is a test, He test some by giving them, others by taking things from them and on the day of judgment, money will not help, it will be deeds, glad to know that the river was liked by someone, good luck,welcome to ps and continue to write
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