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River Testaments

Fertile silt spilt over its bank Providing voluptuous life Northward compass unusual to intersect with Orion Illuminated stars for wise men three Moses basket ride, Israelite pride Life along miles of virile poignant Nile Omnipotent sent a proffer Humble son gift euphonious Trinity, accept the offer Blest banks of Jordan, satiate Acceptance grant by the author Pontius Pilate governing Saviors fate Instinct attitude, caveat debate Imbibe in the soul space, venerate place~ word count 74

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Date: 2/28/2017 9:30:00 AM
i think this would be a very good entry for the river contest, i particularly like the wordplay of silt/spilt...thanks for commenting on my work
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Donna Roberts
Date: 2/28/2017 2:42:00 PM
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