River Sages

Roaming rivers twist and turn for miles; They are never bored but, anxious, As they collect their treasures. The rivers grow wise and Become old sages, Full of knowledge. If only, They could Talk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 4:10 PM
if they could talk, the one by us would be screaming because it is at flood stage. Nicely done, my friend.
Kiser Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Oh my, I hope your house is safe. Good luck with that river water and thanks.
Anish Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 8:53 PM
If rivers could talk they would tell us a lot! Nice poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Kiser Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Much appreciated, Matthew.
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Lovely, ML. A wonderful read.
Kiser Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:55 AM
Thank you again, Line.
Pandit Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 3:56 PM
They talk in ebbs and flows..giggling on twists and turns..floating in your words.
Kiser Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Ooh, I love that; good imagery for a poem; thanks.
Sands Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 2:48 PM
This is great. It makes me think of being at the river nearby too. Well written :)
Kiser Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:57 AM
Thanks again, Heidi; I love the waterways; their music is so soothing.
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