River Romance

It is easier to float downstream
Than to paddle against the current.
Going with the tide takes small effort
Problem is, we must work to get home.

Don’t be lulled into idle thinking-- 
Thinking that we can have a free ride.
If we catch a fish, clean it. Eat it.
Or put the fish back in the water.

Life on the river with its romance
Has a certain sparkle and a joy.
Fresh air, leafy trees, new adventures.
What’s around the bend? Go and find out!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kamoonpuri Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 4:21 AM
Awesome freeverse style n content. Works as metaphor too. Let's row the boat merrily merrily downstream then poet. Kudos, Soo nice to read from your pen again. Hoping u will too , my latest.
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August 18, 2017 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, SZK, for those kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:59 PM
this is super fine, James. Good luck in the contest. I know I will need good luck when I post mine. I can't seem to win a river contest!!
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December 8, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Thanks Andrea. Your entry, if up to your skill will place high.
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