River Rapids

( RIVER RAPIDS )

R- Riding in a raft, heart racing, water splashing.
I- Intense situation, always careful, of any crashing.
V- Voyage underway, up and down is the motion.
E- Extreme class 6, dangerous magic without a potion.
R- Rock splats, load the back, warning signs are flashing.

R- Regulations, Qualifications, essential things to know.
A- Alluring, addicting, as the excitement starts to grow.
P- Pirouette executed, avoiding obstacles in the way.
I- Incoherent unaware, of the prices that you`ll pay.
D- Dangerous waters, unforgiving, but curious in your mind.
S- Scary tension starts to mount, as the time starts to wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 6:08 AM
you got me in the sport of kayaking? hope i spelled it right though.. :) imagery wow.. like your P.. :) exciting acrostic!
Cruz Avatar
October 26, 2014 at 10:58 AM
ty Olive. that was my 1st time writing in that form. glad you liked it. thanks for visiting
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