River Rafters

rafters run rapids raucous ribaldry resounds ~ rugged ridge raptors Written October 22, 2022

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Date: 10/23/2022 4:20:00 AM

this could have also slid into alliteration oh so well Hank! Wow! Impressive!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/23/2022 8:32:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. It seemed to come so naturally. I really wasn't trying for alliteration, it just happened that way.

Date: 10/22/2022 4:46:00 PM

Clever Milton I am sure it is difficult to find words to tell a theme starting with the same letter...

Michael Tor
Date: 10/22/2022 11:31:00 PM

Forgive my mispelling I just noticed and corrected. I should proofread more lol...

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/22/2022 6:46:00 PM

(chuckling) Hmmm...well, in this case, it wasn't so hard, but I don't think I want to make a practice of it. Thanks!